I agree, very strong paper with good cited facts. but disagree with donnamick about the third person. An essay should never be written in first person, it makes it seem biased.
- 14/06/2009
- 12:37:12
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More research will strengthen your arguments, in turn making your essay stronger as well.
- 14/06/2009
- 12:13:46
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Thesis unclear, or non existent. Seems more like an informative piece than an essay..
- 14/06/2009
- 12:12:02
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I especially liked how I linked philosophy and religion to the Matrix in the same essay.
- 13/06/2009
- 19:44:10
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