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Sorry, but I must be the devils advocate
As my title states, I must point out everything that is wrong. Although, I must agree that it was excellently written, and the structure was indeed superb, your punctuation has left a lot to be desired. I really don't think I should point out every or any mistake, but just some advice, read over the essay and maybe re-submit it. Then again, you have already submitted it to your professor, so I don't expect you to do that.
- 08/01/2003
- 00:28:02
- Score: 35 out of 43 people found this comment useful.
Just a comment
From what I was able to read, I agreed and enjoyed. The only thing I have to say is that you should have elaborated on the tolerance/immunity of some vaccinations. This issue is fairly uncommon, but to neglect mentioning this could cause some unnecessary ignorance.
- 08/01/2003
- 00:20:28
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.