A baby is a humnan being. I'm sorry, but no person has the right to take the life of another. Once that baby is conceived it is alive.As to the content of your paper, I have no arguments as to your writing. It was very well written, I just do not agree.
- 06/02/2003
- 21:19:49
- Score: 36 out of 41 people found this comment useful.
I can remember sitting in those history classes BORED TO DEATH!!!! They really do seem very insipid and unsatisfying to students now a days. Like others have stated, references would be nice to add to the paper. Very good stuff.
- 06/02/2003
- 18:52:08
- Score: 26 out of 26 people found this comment useful.
Very good informational essay. IF writing was solely based onw riting I would have loved the paper, but a little more literary style would really set your paper apart from the rest.
- 06/02/2003
- 17:29:55
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I am with you 100%! Your essay was really great if you ask me. It's crazy to know that I can fight and die for my country, but I can't even pick up a glass of beer.
- 06/02/2003
- 06:22:21
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
The paper was very well written I will say. You could have reached out and provided a different view of homosexuals, and made your paper about 10 times better. It's never an easy issue to talk about, but you have to discuss both sides soemtimes.
- 05/02/2003
- 22:05:08
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Very well written essay. I completely agree with your views on teenage drug usage in our society. I really enjoyed reading the paper. Once again, good work.
- 05/02/2003
- 21:59:44
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I honestly don't have much to say about the structure of your paper, besides it was very well written. I just really enjoyed learning some new things about what I drink and how it affects my body. Good work!
- 05/02/2003
- 17:12:51
- Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
I really enjoyed reading your paper. But of course, like everyone else stated, soemtimes you just have to keep your opinions to yourself. Although I agree with your opinions and can relate to them, a number of readers may not. Just to say.....I really really dislike smokers! :)
- 05/02/2003
- 17:08:50
- Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
I think your essay has very good points about high school drop outs, but I think another huge issue is the lack of support that the so-called under-acheivers recieve from school officials and teachers. It's sad, but in many cases it's often the truth.
- 05/02/2003
- 17:02:39
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I just wanted to let you know that you have made many TRUE, and somewhat saddening, remarks about gang presence. The paper itself wasn't a great literary work or anything, but I indeed enjoyed reading.
- 04/02/2003
- 22:26:02
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
You have some very good issues within your paper, but you really need to put a little bit more into researching your topic. With a few more hours of picking away at your paper you could definitely have a nice argumentative essay on uniforms.
- 03/02/2003
- 16:18:04
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
You have very well structured senctences. The ending indeed was quite nice.
- 03/02/2003
- 16:04:42
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.