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  • Some good points

    This is an excellent start to a good paper. But you do need to include some rebuttal of opposing points. Also, you said that they do not racially profile people in airports or other such places but that is not compleatly accurate...they are not SUPPOSED to racially profile, but they still do it very often. Alot of your information was opinionated; I think it would help your argument if you added more statistics/facts.
    • 29/03/2003
    • 19:39:56
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good stuff

    pretty well written. the beginning is kind of typical and overused...."I will examine..." other than that, I liked it!
    • 26/02/2003
    • 18:11:23
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.