Good job, pretty good essay scientifically, except for the fact that some details aren't too clear and I'm not sure I'd actually be able to make my own fireworks out of the information given. Also, it does not sound like you are suggesting in building your own fireworks as said in your conclusion, and it wouldn't have been hard to research something up on the internet (:
- 17/03/2004
- 03:54:41
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The ideas on here are pretty scrambled, but I'd say the grade was given fairly. Your article does have some good ideas, but in my opinion, they aren't that clear. Are you talking about T.V. channels in the U.S.?
- 16/03/2004
- 10:22:15
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Whao, great job. I loved this essay and I agree with the points. Although Job was tested by God, he was blessed with twice as much later. The essay analyzes Job's tests really well. Keep up the good work!
- 11/03/2004
- 04:38:15
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.