way to plagarise the whole thing off of medical articles....psssh. F
- 05/07/2010
- 13:56:47
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This essay was copied from user Islandfairy27 who posted this two years before as the original writer.
- 09/04/2010
- 10:22:59
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After a rougher analysis this essay seems well, but when running it through a plagiarism detection system the VAST majority of this essay has been plagiarized by other websites. In fact most fragments simply google searched will instantly come up. Sorry, but this essay is little to no good. :-(
- 09/04/2010
- 10:14:39
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This essay, or thesis per'se is simply extravagant in the amount of information cited and put to point. While online sources are used, they are used with precision and defended fully in his case. I would have liked to see more direct citing out of Rousseau's works in the citings to devoid reader confusion, but he does this with what is of Rousseau's online collection published. Great job!
- 09/04/2010
- 09:58:23
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I too did APUSH and AP Gov't and an essay like this would get you a five on the AP test(or at least on the essay portion), keep up the good work.
- 02/03/2010
- 13:47:05
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Too much citing and little verse from one-sided psychologists and researchers. Try broadening the scope a bit and paraphrasing more than copying citations.
- 02/03/2010
- 13:45:22
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I am in college right now, however I remember DBQ's for AP US History and AP Government and this has been well written with great detail. The AP graders come May (test month) will want to see more strong verse and organization however for the perfect five on the AP exam. Good luck!
- 02/03/2010
- 13:38:26
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Typos, verse alliteration, faulty diction, and poorly constructed sentences. Overall I doubt this essay was college material, or for that matter received and A+.
- 09/12/2009
- 09:57:02
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I have done a case study of Canon Inc. for my AP Economics class and the author indeed states that Siebel has dominated Canon's CRM. However, I have also read in following Wall Street Journal articles that many domestic Japanese companies are targeting upon lowering their CRM's not only domestically but also internationally. One must also consider the impact of the recession upon CRM especially with hard hit Japanese companies like Canon.
- 24/11/2009
- 03:05:21
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