This story is one of the best I have ever read. It contains great emotion. I could easily feel empathy for the boy. The ending sent chills up my spine.
- 16/09/2009
- 06:39:31
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Very easy to read. Would be better if the ending wasn't rushed.
- 16/09/2009
- 05:39:58
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This story is good yet slightly confusing to read. Could add more onto the vaguely familiar soldier. Very powerful ending.
- 16/09/2009
- 05:14:33
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Well thought out plot. Some spelling errors however. An extremely capturing story. Well done.
- 16/09/2009
- 05:07:21
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A very detailed analysis
- 27/05/2009
- 07:52:52
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