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    i believe that this essay could be a lot better. it is written on a 9th or 8th grade level. there are no words on a high vocabulary level. many words are redundent and to fix this essay to become presentable would be more work than it is worth. on a scale 1 to 10 i would give it a 5.
    • 27/10/2003
    • 14:01:32
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.