Seems to be plagiarized directly from the references the author gives. Also, wikipedia is just not a strong enough source to use in papers anymore.
- 29/01/2008
- 19:12:20
- Score: 9 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
Obviously, this essay is describing something, but the author does not give us any information as to what they are describing. Otherwise, it is very well written.
- 29/01/2008
- 19:10:21
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Good essay, but seems too exact in what it says. Meaning, it seems like some things were taken word for word from something. Also, the author does not put much of there own thoughts into the paper. A few grammar mistakes, but anyone should be able to find them.
- 29/01/2008
- 18:46:36
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Thought wrenching essay, again based solely on the authors thoughts. If you feel the same way as this author, then you may want to use it.
- 29/01/2008
- 18:43:17
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a good paper.....for a middle schooler. The grammar is evidence for this right off the bat. Also, a works cited would be nice, as there are a few quotes used and the author should tell us where they came from.
- 29/01/2008
- 18:39:22
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a decent paper and unlike many essays/papers, has the works cited page to back it up. There is one part of the paper where it lists the characteristics of single parent families that could be changed for the better, but otherwise good.
- 29/01/2008
- 18:35:27
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
If this were a five minute debate, its a perfect paper. This is just the authors view of immigration and immigration policies. Needs some grammar fixed, and may not be a complete 2 page paper, but other wise it is just someones viewpoint on immigration.
- 29/01/2008
- 18:33:01
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is sort of an essay, but really seems like the author had questions to answer and just did them in that order. Again, this is no in depth history of the guitar, just a nit and gritty straight to the point paper.
- 29/01/2008
- 18:30:31
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
A decently written essay on computer programmers. Unfortunately, for the length of the paper, there are a multitude of different types of programmers that the author does not mention. There are a few grammar mistakes, but otherwise a decent essay.
- 29/01/2008
- 18:28:38
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A well written essay on the book. The essay takes a stab at the meaning of the book and of what the main characters values play.
- 29/01/2008
- 18:26:55
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Very creative short story. Some ideas seem to be taken from Frosty the Snowman, but all original ideas. The only thing I see missing is that this was supposedly a descriptive essay. If it was meant to be, add more description into your characters and the environment. Otherwise, pretty good.
- 29/01/2008
- 06:54:59
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is not an essay. This is more an itinerary for someone who was or would be visiting those countries. To make it an essay, write out full paragraphs about your experience, what you thought, felt, where you went, and what you did.
- 29/01/2008
- 06:51:16
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
If you ever wanted to know anything about the Red Hot Chili Peppers, this essay hits on just about anything you would want to know about them. Very well written.
- 29/01/2008
- 06:44:30
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Very nicely written, compares and contrasts to objects very well
- 28/03/2005
- 00:25:45
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.