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  • Very bias

    You have a very bias approach onto this subject, it is very well written, and supported, but heavily one sided and would tend to let readers lean against you, you must write about both aspects, good and evil, and even play devils advocate to look like you understand the subject more.
    • 26/10/2009
    • 20:58:13
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