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  • Hard read

    I'm sorry, but I had to stop ready by the 3rd paragraph. I'm surprised you claim to have gotten such a high grade. You grammar and punctuation are terrible, and your flow is equally asinine.You make good points, but your grammatical skills need work, as does your readability. Eliminate the $3 words and your reader might actually finish reading what you've spent so much time on.
    • 16/01/2010
    • 23:58:34
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