You didnt cover your topic very well. Less that 250 words is not enough to properly explain what you set out to. It appears that you never finished this essay. I recommend revising and extending and backing up your point of view as well.
- 20/06/2004
- 00:58:21
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I never knew there could be any reasons to doubt that the events of sept 11 were not terrorists acts. Although it turns out that they are, thanks for opening my eyes to other possibilities
- 21/04/2004
- 05:12:51
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Strong argument and good use of quotes to support it
- 21/04/2004
- 04:49:50
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
there are different ways of spelling recognize depending on where you come from.
- 13/09/2003
- 19:44:07
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
As said before, you do need to develope your ideas futher. You have made some very good points but did not back them up which is a shame. You might have also considered a comprimise, such as having all phones turned completely off during class time but be allowed to use them during lunch and recess.
- 13/09/2003
- 19:37:20
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This was just one big summery! I was expecting some discussion of the themes and/or assuptions and assertions made in the text. Oh, well. It was still well written none the less.
- 13/09/2003
- 19:29:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Thank you so much for posting this eassy! You have helped me very much with my assignment! It was a very informative piece that helped me to no ends, thanks again ;)
- 18/08/2003
- 18:45:25
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
So, where did you rip this essay off from? I have seen at least 3 other copies of it on this site alone. As they say in parliment, SHAME!! (
- 18/08/2003
- 18:19:52
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Started of poorly but came good in the end. You kept changing tenses and some sentences were too long and lacking punctuation. I suggest rewriting this piece and taking a little more time and care with your potentially good essay.
- 18/08/2003
- 17:54:38
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Maybe if you had had more motivation and a little encoragement from your parents you might have bothered to write a worthwhile essay. Haven't you ever heard of spell check? You have a good basis for a decent essay. Why don't you actually write one?
- 02/08/2003
- 21:53:39
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a good pice, very deep and descriptive, but needs a little revising
- 13/07/2003
- 00:24:38
- Score: 20 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
This was very interesting point of view. I have never thought to place feelings such as that with a tree. Although it seemed a little rough, it was very good!
- 24/03/2003
- 01:13:54
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This was written very well. The use of descriptive writing to form a visual was excelent!
- 21/03/2003
- 02:03:15
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This was a really good essay. I never realised that there were different legal rights for women depening on if they were married or not.
- 21/03/2003
- 01:56:22
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I really liked this eassy. It was straight to the point and very informative. It is the best I have read on this site.
- 19/03/2003
- 03:38:46
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
- was potent, yes- lacked something undefinable- felt unfinished- very descriptive
- 17/03/2003
- 01:26:15
- Score: 12 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
- made some very good arguements thatwere wlll backed up- was very effective in persuading thereader
- 12/03/2003
- 02:06:36
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
-was clearly biased-didn't have such great flow-made some valid points
- 10/03/2003
- 00:13:50
- Score: 12 out of 17 people found this comment useful.