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  • Opinion paper??

    If this is only a simple opinion paper then i think it was pretty well done. I agree with kiahorse though that you do not back up your argument(if it is an argumentative paper), but you also leave the other side of the story out of the paper.. I dont care that you left the other side out because most anyone that has been anywhere but a podunk town should know what people who oppose gay marriage feel and what their opinions are. Overall i think that you put some of your personal feelings into it so it made it a little bit more than a vut and dry factual paper
    • 21/01/2005
    • 16:47:21
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Baby boo

    thanks for teh support on the essay.. i researched it for about a month before i wrote this.
    • 21/01/2005
    • 16:36:31
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • So True

    I totally agree with all your points in this essay but i think that you could have also added a few points. Especially on the point that " I have my own music, my own files and I have right to share it to my friend." I remember buying loads of CDs in 2000 and 2001 and then making mix cds for my friends.. There is no difference between that and sharing your music online and downloading.
    • 21/01/2005
    • 07:15:11
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • I like this essay

    I like this essay it is very in depth and explains alot of differnt things. It was also an easy read which is quite difficult when writing about religion in general. I think you pulled off a good interesting essay on a difficult subject.
    • 10/12/2003
    • 23:11:45
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    This story is good and all but this isnt possible. A world with no guns is not something i think will happen in my lifetime, it would be something that i think would improve the world greatly.
    • 10/12/2003
    • 23:08:42
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice paper

    I liked this paper quite alot, very interesting. The paper could be better if the grammar was better.
    • 10/12/2003
    • 23:00:46
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Information

    The information is good but the paper is not that good. The paper is not that good because of it's bad grammar and punctuation. If that part of the paper was fixed this paper would be very good.
    • 10/12/2003
    • 22:57:14
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good for your grade level

    I think you have gotten the basics of her life but you do need to fill in more details. It needs to be more thourough and in depth. But it is good for your age.
    • 10/12/2003
    • 22:41:00
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    I really liked this essay. Nice job of putting your thoughts and feelings into words =)
    • 28/04/2003
    • 13:14:11
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok essay

    If this would have been just about mentoring it would have been excellent, but it was about mentoring in the army. Well i didn't like the fact that you went from saying we need mentoring in thr Army because this and that in the introduction, to having the majority of the body on what mentoring is and its merits, not at all putting that in to terms with how it would be done in the army
    • 28/04/2003
    • 13:09:59
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Very informative and also very true!

    I have served in the army and my grandfather also has. He served in WW2 and we have talked many times on this exact subject. You have really written this exactly the way we have talked about it. So much has changed over the years for the training in the United States Army. Thanks for giving this subject its due.
    • 28/04/2003
    • 13:05:03
    • Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Fuck u peoples

    what is wrong with my essay? I got an A on it so shove it
    • 28/04/2003
    • 12:59:17
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • This essay is a little long and drawn out.

    i can understand why u got a grade like that. the essay skips around and gets confusing to a person that doesnt understand the subject totally in depth. The essay has very many references that shows that you tried hard, i think the paper was long but it did have a lot of information it in
    • 15/03/2003
    • 14:21:17
    • Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Short and Sweet

    This essay covered all the bases of explaining MS. The paper is well written and mostly written so normal people can understand MS. I still think this paper should have been a little longer and more explainatary.
    • 15/03/2003
    • 14:14:04
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • I like this essay

    i used this essay and i got an A..YEAH, i made some changes also. There are many incomplete sentences that are very long. This paper is written towards someone that was in the same class as you or even towards the teacher. i had to change it so that there was a little more information for the people that did maybe not know what was going on.
    • 11/03/2003
    • 17:43:15
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good information in the paper but...

    This paper needs work on the structure, paragraphs, sentences, and all that done and you would be on the way to an excellant paper.
    • 11/03/2003
    • 16:26:27
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Structure Structure Structure

    If u fixed up the structure of this paper it would be excellent, take out some bias and it would be almost perfect. Work on those things and you would not any problems getting easy A's on papers
    • 11/03/2003
    • 16:23:49
    • Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Well i got info

    much info from the story but i really thought the essay was not strong enough to deserve an 80%.
    • 11/03/2003
    • 16:20:25
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good

    i like the essays examples and how it seems you are very much behind the legalization of marijuana but the sentences were almost all incomplete. that is the downfall of this essay.
    • 11/03/2003
    • 16:15:21
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.