i think that you should of put the paer into paragraphs
- 11/03/2003
- 02:21:28
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
i think that your ideas were good but the sentences were very much the same. maybe a little more organization of the paragraphs
- 11/03/2003
- 02:15:07
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
i think that this essay was very informative and well written. the only downfall is that in the beginning the sentences seemd a little unorganized
- 10/03/2003
- 02:05:08
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.