Every emotion is there, brought tears to my eyes at the end.I loved the way you wrote this.Well done
- 03/03/2004
- 19:59:15
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very good , i liked this,made me think about things
- 03/03/2004
- 19:31:30
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think you wrote this essay very well, every thing you said is true, people should exercise more and not sit on there butts on the couch and hope to get rid of there fat by some pill, you had a lot of good information and you explained it well.
- 23/04/2003
- 09:43:42
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You wrote that poem so well, you must of put your heart into it. I loved it.A girl wanting the love of her life back.You explained your emotions so well.
- 23/04/2003
- 09:11:59
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
heaps of spelling mistakes and not written that well.
- 20/03/2003
- 21:23:04
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.