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  • Positive

    This is easily the most complete paper on cheathouse in regards to the spread of buddhism in China. If someone is looking for a great example of a paper to base theres off of or to help them get some ideas on what to right about. This is a great choice. ( Don't forget to fix your spelling/grammer heh )
    • 22/03/2005
    • 02:38:55
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • One Sided

    This article seems EXTREMELY biased and one sided. Sure, females arn't equal to males on alot of things, but these days it's also flip sided.Example: A big argument is that women and men should earn equal salaries for the same job, yet the average salary for a female is less then the average salary for a male in the same job. The facts hidden away from you, is also that the average male works a six hour longer work week then the average female for the same job. That's over 300 additional hours a year, who are you going to hire? Male or Female?Theres PLENTY of other examples such as men being prejudiced against in child custody disputes, divorces, rape allegations and domestic violence.If you are going to write a paper about equality, I suggest you cover both sides of the issue.
    • 09/02/2005
    • 22:15:06
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Read

    This was a great overview of the movie that included some real life comparsions. Great piece of work that was done with some feeling and emotion. Important qualities of a good piece of literature. But, I have to agree with the other users, that this is extremely stereotypical, you'll notice that in most these situations, these kids arn't ignored! It's just what they've grown up watching from even the closest family members.But also in response to yourmom98, that view of adults towards teenagers has been like that for generations. Can't forget about that DEVIL "ROCK & ROLL MUSIC" that leads to drugs, sex, and everything else bad.
    • 09/02/2005
    • 22:06:52
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Not Bad

    Good Essay, but seriously, who can read a giant paragraph?
    • 09/02/2005
    • 21:56:49
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • GREAT ESSAY

    Possibly one of my favorite essays in a while, thought it was actually pretty funny in some parts but it is able to keep it serious in important parts. I love it!! Thanks for this great addition to the site!
    • 03/06/2003
    • 23:24:31
    • Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Decent

    Really needs a conclusion, right now no conclusion is better then that one sentance. 2nd, I suggest that the author works on the gammer errors found in the paper. Otherwise, it is pretty good just needs a few things fixxed.
    • 01/06/2003
    • 16:00:53
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Biography?

    This essay seems to stray off topic and kind of turn into a biography of eminem. I have to say though, about young adults and children listening to Eminem. Its just another example of why parents and teens need to talk more often if at all about what is acceptable and what isnt. A person once said: "I may disagree with what he says, but I will defend to my death his right to say it", Eminem shouldnt be blamed for influencing their kids. The parents should be blamed for not influencing their kids...
    • 20/05/2003
    • 19:01:17
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • AWESOME

    High quality paper, with very few errors, if any. Citing could be used but not required. Great Conclusion, that happens to be so true.
    • 19/05/2003
    • 18:56:32
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good, I like

    I think this essay brings good points, but like glengem said, it really needs some help in some areas. But I have to say, I dont agree with rebecky139 at all, I think this essay shows what it is to be an American.
    • 19/05/2003
    • 15:11:53
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Playing God?

    I really don't think cloning should be considered playing god if like what YMW99 said, we cure diseases all the time that god has created, its the same concept. But otherwise its very brief but concise and to the point.
    • 19/05/2003
    • 15:04:16
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Essay

    I liked it alot, but it seemed very very brief. Seems like it could go in depth a little more if length is something that is desired.
    • 19/05/2003
    • 14:58:11
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Descriptive

    Really good essay telling where it came from and all the different type and quanities...
    • 14/04/2003
    • 01:09:52
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Enjoyable

    Good essay on explaining the life of a knight and on referencing to.
    • 02/04/2003
    • 11:43:39
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Solid Paper

    Long quality paper which provides lots of support for all of its information provided. Overall it is Excellent.
    • 02/04/2003
    • 11:39:26
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Quality Short Story

    I think this is a good example of what might have been happening lately in the world. Good Story.
    • 02/04/2003
    • 11:31:06
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice Poem

    Lacks the kind of strong depth which a better vocabulary would improve but overall, it is pretty decent.
    • 31/03/2003
    • 16:10:02
    • Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Good

    Covered all his topics with great support and depth. Very good paper for someone looking to learn more about memorization and how our mind kind of works.
    • 31/03/2003
    • 16:06:10
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.