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In the Crucible residents inflicted with hysteria inflict dreadful atrocities against themselves and their community. (Religion, Mental Conflict and the Inability To Adapt)
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Barium chloride plus silver nitrate equals silver chloride and barium nitrate
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Interesting Views and Good Support
Very well writen essay with support. However, "I" needs to be removed from the essay to place the essay in 3rd person point of view. Also, A few of the sentences need to be placed in active voice. Overall the ethical ideas are wonderful and we expressed. However, the organizational structure needs to be re-analyzed to provide for greater readibility flow and comprehension.- 25/03/2003
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