I haven't seen the movie in a while, but I believe that you caught all of the major points. It was written with a pretty objective outlook, which is alwais a plus.Very nice.
- 01/06/2003
- 23:00:51
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I think that you could have extended it a bit, but it worked out really well.Kudos
- 01/06/2003
- 22:56:16
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I like the fact that you use actually citing of other essays. A lot of teachers like that. I commend you in the depth of which you delved in this subject. I write poetry myself, and am glad that a 9th grader (no offense) can truely appreciate this art. Thank you
- 01/06/2003
- 22:51:47
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willy did not realize that the american dream failed him. Ever, much less in one day. He just started hallucinating, or Imagining if you will, that things were better than they were. And he rejected the facts of his life. Otherwise a great essay.
- 26/03/2003
- 21:49:22
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.