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  • Good

    The content was okay, and the works were cited. I've noticed not many papers on this site contain the works documented throughout papers. Good job.
    • 09/04/2003
    • 20:02:59
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Done

    This essay was done very nicely. The author establishes why they believe juveniles should be tried differently from adults. The content was very well written. Good job!
    • 09/04/2003
    • 19:59:55
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Persuasion

    The author of this paper did a good job of stating their vies and opinions on businesses monitoring e-mails written in the workplace. There were a view grammatical errors, such as capitaling "employees", and a few minor things like that. Good job.
    • 08/04/2003
    • 22:27:36
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Written

    This paper was very good. The author shows they know a lot of information about Stephen King and his novels. The author was able to express what they wanted to say very clearly and fluently. I can not think of any criticisms to say. Nice job!
    • 08/04/2003
    • 21:55:05
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Alright Essay

    The paper was well written, but I would make a few grammatical corrections. I would eliminate the exclamation marks and replace them with periods. This makes the paper look more professional. There were a few spelling errors, but those can easily be corrected. A suggestion is to remove the "you's" from your paper. Write the paper as though this has happened to someone and not as though you are suggesting it. Overall, with a few corrections, this is a great paper. :)
    • 08/04/2003
    • 21:45:48
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Job

    This paper was well researched and well written. The author clearly knew what they were talking about in the paper and stayed on the subject. Great job!
    • 08/04/2003
    • 21:41:34
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Television

    There are several corrections that I would make to this paper. In the title, I would change it to: "Television Violence: Does the Violence on Television Negatively Affect Children?:. Affect should be spelled with an "a" and not an "e" because affect means influence. I would remove all of the "@" signs. Change the = signs to a ', or in some cases, there is no punction needed. I would remove all of the random "A"'s that are all over the paper. In the opening paragraph, I would change the fourth statement to read as follows: "Whether on the news, movies, or commercials, violence is present on various channels." There are many other corrections I would make, so if you would like to know them, just contact me!
    • 06/04/2003
    • 20:51:43
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Child Abuse

    This essay was well written and well researched. However, I would write it more in ascending order. The part where it says, "Most of all, Crutcher shows the importance of reaching out.", I would put that as my last point of the paper. Since essays should be written in ascending order of relevence, I would put this last. Good job!
    • 06/04/2003
    • 20:40:31
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.