I'm not sure where exactly you are going with this, whether it is supposed to be about his book or him personally. It kind of splits me in two seperate directions.
- 24/02/2004
- 09:18:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
1 poor introduction2 weak transition from point to point3 A disappointing conclusionThe flow of this article is sketchy at best. However you do provide relevent pointsbut the presentation needs works
- 24/02/2004
- 09:03:48
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very long essay yet the conclusion leaves too many unanswered issues.
- 24/02/2004
- 08:53:41
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
An interesting topic to write a position paper on
- 24/02/2004
- 08:50:21
- Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
good job!
- 10/07/2003
- 10:47:26
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Conclusion could be better. Overall, well done
- 10/07/2003
- 10:33:16
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.