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  • Racism in Malcomn X

    This was a vert informative essay. Very well stated.But you should watch out for those grammatical errors. Also, it is true that two wrongs don't make a right but if you are never taught the truth or the right, how are you to make the "right" decision. It took Malcolm to go on his pilgramage to Mecca to learn that white men aren't Devils. Many people don't know that Malcom X changed his beliefs after his pilgramage and turned his back on the teachings of Elijah Muhammed.
    • 06/05/2003
    • 15:18:17
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Child Abuse

    This is a good start to a paper But youshould elaborate more on the differnt types of abuse i.e sexual abuse, physical abuse, physical neglect, mental abuse and emotional neglect...add some statistics too
    • 29/04/2003
    • 23:14:57
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.