I don't think these subject can be summed up in an essay...
- 05/01/2009
- 14:41:54
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I believe they only use one source the whole paper which they don't bother to site at the end of the paper. Is an ok paper but could b better, just seems kind of rushed
- 26/11/2008
- 05:29:20
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Great paper very interesting but only thing I think it would have been better if you would have sited your sources in your paper.
- 26/11/2008
- 05:20:01
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finally a very good paper to view
- 23/11/2008
- 05:59:44
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great Paper we need more good ones like this.
- 27/06/2008
- 07:31:05
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Ok paper. First source is incorrect.
- 22/06/2008
- 17:54:37
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good essay. doesn't really tell the effects of comericals on teenagers though, more aimed at everyone. Nothing at all wrong with that
- 06/06/2008
- 21:57:26
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I Don't like this essay.Who needs a mini-essay? A mini-essay deserves a mini-grade! Needs a lot of work starting with the title and my Lord an opening!Seems very much so pasted.Works citied aren't correct either.
- 06/06/2008
- 21:41:57
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wasn't really what I was excepting to read when I opened this up...or what was I excepting, who knows? This is more like an autobiography of Beeson
- 03/06/2008
- 05:56:36
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HHMMM Very nice vocabulary for a 5th grader! Starting early on this site I guess
- 01/06/2008
- 20:01:41
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Can we say, copied straight out of a text book? Yes we sure can, don't know how this one slipped threw.
- 01/06/2008
- 08:48:13
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Why is this garbage still here? Throw it in the trash where it belongs, its been here long enough.
- 15/04/2008
- 18:46:01
- Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Nice essay. As a student in high school I hated homework. I also was involved in the extracurricular activities which made it even more of a pest. More teachers should, agree with your point of view. Nice Essay
- 23/03/2008
- 08:22:30
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
What exactly is the purpose of this essay? For one it has long winded sentences. It also does not have strong points nor data to back up anything.
- 21/03/2008
- 16:38:15
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay lacks clarity which makes it sink into a meaninglessness hole. What is the purpose of this essay? It barley even talks about software.
- 17/03/2008
- 08:53:52
- Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I like you you phrase what your trying to say to get your point across. It is not their "diet" (oh how do I love how you phrased that) which influences the person it is the state in which their mind is in.
- 04/04/2007
- 04:45:02
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Oh my word can I please get a English translation?
- 01/02/2007
- 12:33:42
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
How about an English translation?
- 31/01/2007
- 09:25:58
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I like the essay but I thought it was kind of bias. You talked about the good things of public schools, but none of the private. I went to a public school from K-12 and I loved it, but I would also like to know about private schools.
- 27/01/2007
- 07:15:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Not really sure what you're labeling your paper as but it has a nice vibe to it. It would be great as a poem.
- 27/01/2007
- 07:06:09
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
You talked about alot of causes for studnets to drop out of school but not any of the effects. Supposed to be Cause AND effect.
- 29/11/2006
- 06:28:22
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
"As far as religious accuracy, "The Passion of the Christ" leaves viewers wondering exactly what all the blood was shed for. It is this inconclusiveness that is the most prominent artistic and biblical acuity failure in this movie." It does not in any way leave me wondering, I know his blood was shed for me, you, and everyone.
- 26/11/2006
- 17:07:27
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Poor organization of thoughts, brief paragraphs, and fragments.
- 12/11/2006
- 17:58:03
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WOW! I've never heard of calling the police because your in violation of the school code. Your school must be very serious about uniforms. Well written essay, but let me say "WOW" again!
- 11/11/2006
- 06:02:10
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I thought that your paper was well writen, and very interesting. Good look on what you do in life.
- 11/11/2006
- 05:45:13
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
My brother lives in auck. nz and has now for 7 years. He says he loves it and has started a family over there. I was thinking about coming over but you make it sound so bad...is it indeed that horrible?
- 15/10/2006
- 16:44:18
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
What exactly are the users here supposed to do with this story? I agree with the user that posted a comment before me, hopefully this is the beginning of a short story. Are you the person that posted the story about what you thought your perfect day would be, beacuse this story seems along the same format. Just wondering.
- 23/09/2006
- 17:50:21
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Awesome paper, I don't think it is a perfect paper, and based on the score you put you thought it was.
- 21/09/2006
- 09:07:05
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good paper, same things everyone has been saying including the news....and you have misplaced modifiers
- 21/09/2006
- 09:02:15
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Is a good essay BUT you could have wrapped your paper off with a good smooth closing and you would have probably received an A.
- 13/09/2006
- 18:59:17
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You need better transitions, also your paper is too rushed, and did you forget your conclusion? You had good word selection for an 8th grader, but deserved the grade that you recieved on your paper.
- 12/09/2006
- 14:54:19
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I leave confused.
- 10/09/2006
- 19:59:05
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Illegal immigration is a problem, I agree but bigger things first, the government needs to get the things overseas back to order so our troops can come home.You were kind of reaching in your essay, "Another fact is that 15 million illegal immigrants steal jobs away from American citizens every day",how do they steal jobs?15 million every day? Steal being the operative word. Ok and another idea instead of shunning them for being illegal why not help those who can be helped and want to be helped become legal citizens.
- 07/09/2006
- 09:19:54
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You did not talk about the many different personalities there are you just talked about yours. Needs more depth.
- 06/09/2006
- 15:47:49
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay was about Henry Adams, I thought it was more of a view point on how age can bring about wisdom through lifes experiences.
- 12/07/2006
- 11:36:41
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a very nice paper. I hope that I have to write an essay over the first admendment so that I can be (assisted) by your paper.
- 03/05/2006
- 08:45:23
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You have a nice paper with good points but laws need to and have to be applied to people. The U.S. is free. They don't tell u what religion that you have to be or what you can and can't eat, or belive. You are free to believe what you want until a certain extent, when you start infringing upon others rights, which then makes them not free. You say laws shouldn't be able to tell people what to put on their body because it is our own. But I wouldn't want a free society were people could go around naked without clothes. You might not think people would take it that far, but some surley would. On the matter of smoking weed, weed is a gateway drug that leads to other drugs. And weed just like alcohol impairs your judgment and slows you reaction to things down, if people were free to smoke it then they could get behind the wheel and hurt someone else. A crime is a crime. I don't think people should get the same amount of time for stealing items as to killing someone. But petty crimes done enough will lead to felony's because they believe they can get away with it. And besides the point they are hurting people's business. Good paper overall with excellent points, but what we do not need is a totally free society.
- 16/04/2006
- 23:33:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
First of all, how does a thought, ever have error? If you think something, rather than say it aloud it is your own thought, that no one knows? How does being open minded and unstubborn keep you from making errors? This essay left me puzzled.
- 17/02/2006
- 21:31:44
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I was looking for a break-down or explanation of the poem. But ok, it's all good.
- 17/02/2006
- 21:17:40
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a good argument on why low-income families should continue to recieve Federal help.
- 17/02/2006
- 21:11:11
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a rather good argument on the use of weed, but why fight against something you know is 100% illegal in the US. So your telling me that if everyone smoked weed instead of a cigarette while driving down the road everything would be alright? I'm afraid not! Like I say; it is a good attempt and awesome paper to give weed justice, but tell it to the judge, and see how far you get!
- 16/02/2006
- 22:35:46
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I recently had to read macbeth in English class. When I read it, I didn't get the depth of the play. I had to visit Sparknotes, and other sources to completly understand it. If I would have read your essay before, I would have stopped here. Your essay would have been truly helpful and is an A in my book!
- 13/02/2006
- 16:15:12
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In the beginning of the paper there are many first of alls...... You need better transtion words. You have alot of ideas, but don't develop them. You make a statement and then move on.It also needs a better closing. But is an alround good paper.
- 13/02/2006
- 16:09:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is the shortest cause and effect essay that I have ever read. It was good from the ideas that were brought forward, but many ideas could have been developed more. Like the idea of parents trying to let their "baby" go, and the idea of life being simple, by not dealing aith in-laws at all.
- 12/02/2006
- 16:50:33
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
great paper for someone doing the pros of abortion!
- 07/04/2004
- 19:15:42
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
the essay was great beacause im leaning towards becoming a teacher 1 day and those are all things that i would say are philosphies of teaching!
- 07/04/2004
- 19:13:41
- Score: 16 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
this was a well written report on hughes,he is a great man who acheived many things regardless of his color. The paper was wonderful
- 29/02/2004
- 19:24:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
great paper
- 29/02/2004
- 19:20:06
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I see what your saying but by people reading this essay I really don't think it will sway them one way or another. I think either they have it in their mind to go or not. People that do not go will have 2 exsperience the life of not going just like you had 2 to get the effect to kick in.
- 06/09/2003
- 16:03:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
sex education does start at an early age but every year kida r starting 2 exsperience sex at an earlie age. Nice paper!
- 20/04/2003
- 17:14:52
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
this really helps me out alot is just like ciff notes. I couldnt survive without them. I understand the meaning of the words at a new level with indept things like this. I really hop this 1 goes!
- 20/04/2003
- 17:07:04
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like it so far just put allitle more detail in the book and thats sbout it, I like 2 read stories of this sort and it kinda reminds me of a book that i have read but not really just along the lines
- 20/04/2003
- 15:55:28
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I thought the essay hit some major key oints and should be st to the online commuinty. I learned many things by reading it and im sure they will too.
- 18/04/2003
- 19:28:52
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.