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  • Good job

    This essay sounds really nice and well thought out. The only thing I think you need to add is a conclusion paragraph. You address all of your issues in your thesis, then end it like that. But other than that, well done!
    • 11/09/2003
    • 03:50:00
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely done

    I see you took the time to thoroughly research your information, and make some new, and very persuasive points. It made me think twice upon this argument. Very nicely written!
    • 27/04/2003
    • 15:57:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    I appreciate your comments...thank you very much for your use of constructive criticism...It helps!
    • 27/04/2003
    • 15:50:52
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.