No good.
- 15/03/2006
- 18:49:43
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Lady Macbeth says less than 40 lines, but still manages to convince Macbeth to kill Duncan. She says that because Macbeth is not prepared to commit regicide, he is not a man
- 08/03/2006
- 17:02:32
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Just because you cant undersand, or it is not so "fun" desn't mean it is bad.. hmm... NEED TO FINISH THOUGH~ I give it a -_-
- 27/04/2003
- 20:38:48
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Try avoid using "I" in your essay, and is your essay pure speculation or did you actually know what you are talking about, no fact.
- 27/04/2003
- 19:09:38
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A lot of information, but if it can be more organized it would be better, cite your sources is very important for essay with so much facts. and more analysis of the facts would be better than specutulaton , not bad fo grade 10..
- 27/04/2003
- 19:03:34
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Nice Topic, A formal lab for the public needs an adequent introduction and scholaly approach, less use of "XXX's class" or "The Xth group's results" without explaining fully the PROCEDURE. And your use of "table XXX" and results is not readable.BTW The error analysis is really poor...
- 27/04/2003
- 18:58:57
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is a good piece, what I consider to be of college level ^^ since teacher now require us to do 2000 word report just like this one(Grade 11). But this one seem really professionally done.
- 27/04/2003
- 04:42:07
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Not formal and not well reasoned, but if this is a speech then its reasonable to choose biased argument and appeal to emotion and character. Generally the intention is too obvious and should make counter argument against the view it should be banned for biological harmful effects... my opionin: not at the level of college student
- 27/04/2003
- 04:20:18
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Include a source of error/uncertainty and consderation for the credability of the experiment. Relate the hypothesis to the intro wth justification of your hypothesis. and in my experience use If-Then statment is better.
- 27/04/2003
- 03:59:30
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.