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  • Ehh...

    not exactly the greatest does not fulfill the typical essay formats...very vague...even if you are an eighth grader you need to improve your writing skills and try and make more complete paragraphs...5 pages? use the proper formatting and try and establish a link instead of just using high school teachers expect you to deeply think...or at "MULTIPLE LEVELS" of thinking...try and practice this early on to try and improve your writing and thinking skills
    • 06/05/2003
    • 03:11:56
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