Waitingtosmile I'm ashamed have spotted a few grammer mistakes and missing words, you must put your grammer and spell checker on!
- 30/05/2004
- 12:11:31
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Not a bad essay especially for a timed one waitingtosmile! If you decide to extend upon it then remember to keep relating back to the title of the essay.
- 30/05/2004
- 10:38:20
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
a bit short but pretty good, i agree with waitingtosmile24.
- 21/12/2003
- 08:52:34
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this is excellent, i was gonna say that it was a bit too short, but then i realised said it was a mini essay at the top!
- 11/12/2003
- 12:01:30
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
You really know how to use secondary material, but remember it's also good to keep your analysis short and sweet! Excellent use of secondary information though! I really love the novel Song of Solomon and reccomend people read it.
- 06/12/2003
- 08:19:10
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
clearly the last person that rated this just skimmed it without reading it. You've kinda covered all the points, brief or elongated you did it man. So i say it's really good. I mean a lot of people don't even realise the importance of the Korean war before it preceded the Vietnam war. A much more neagtive image is grasped once you take the whole 'America the great superpower' image from it. I like it also cos the structure is pretty much coherent and u use sophisticated language. Yeah I like. I'd give it an A, and hey man i should know!
- 02/12/2003
- 17:15:06
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.