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Good start
The beginning is funny and interesting, but then in the concluding paragraphs the paper gets rather weak. The usage of 'I' makes it unformal, immature, and less professional; who are you in the first place to inform the public on the president's status?- 01/05/2003
- 11:31:59
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Good start
The beginning is funny and interesting, but the concluding papragraph is a little weak. The usage of 'I' makes it sound less formal; who are you to tell the public about the president's status.- 01/05/2003
- 11:29:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.