needed more facts less opinion Also it need to be longer
- 19/03/2002
- 12:04:16
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This was a well written essay to the point with good facts backing. I feel though that there is a difference between abuse and discipline and there is a point where others should step in and tell the parents that what they are teaching is wrong
- 16/03/2002
- 17:34:11
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
i love both of these movies and never really put 2 and 2 together. I think you needed more of a opening paragraph. this just felt like the body of essay.
- 16/03/2002
- 00:36:06
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
the essay was good but the facts where alittle overwelming check to make sure the spelling is correct next time
- 16/03/2002
- 00:16:20
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.