Im doing a research on ancient civilisation on Japan. This has helped me big time. Thank you for a superb essay.
- 16/10/2004
- 21:50:06
- Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I decided to call it 'Bruised memories' all thanks to MR JOHNJIP. Thanx a million!!
- 16/10/2004
- 11:19:26
- Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is one intense story. I love it!! The title really says it all. It sure has made an impact on me. Kudos and all the best for that writing competition. =p
- 16/10/2004
- 11:11:48
- Score: 6 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
Intially i thought this is crap. Then, i realise (and HOPE).. ur intention for this is to generate humour. I thought of saying "yesh, and bird goes 'tweet'." then i figured this is creative in its own right. So what the heck: The seriousness of the tone and diction used to describe something simple brings out the humour. Although i doubt everyone will appreciate it.
- 13/10/2004
- 00:05:04
- Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I like this a lot. Its seamless in a sense. Not many pple can write with a flow on their essay. Excellent job i must say.. =p
- 12/10/2004
- 23:51:03
- Score: 3 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
It's a good question to ponder on but i think this essay is lacking depth.
- 12/10/2004
- 22:54:23
- Score: 0 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Somehow this piece is rather poetic. It really brings out questions that normally people put aside and as you said, take for granted. The intro really got my attention. Although you never really mentioned what language is all about, You managed to turn a simple topic to a master piece in your own right with the elaborate use of words. Nice job =p
- 12/10/2004
- 03:28:04
- Score: 4 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
There isnt a hint of ur own opinion inthis essay. im not sure if that's good or bad. But the essay is very informative and factual as far as i can tell.
- 11/10/2004
- 18:51:20
- Score: 0 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
It's a highly opinionated essay. Don't get me wrong. Readers will be able to feel ur emotions through it. But it is a little too strong for a proper essay...Too much colloquialism . I personally like it though.
- 11/10/2004
- 17:17:27
- Score: 3 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Anti-climax. It would have been a good story if you had continued. The ending was kind of abrupt.
- 10/10/2004
- 19:04:15
- Score: 2 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Very precise and straight-forward. Make a really interesting and entertaining read.
- 10/10/2004
- 18:56:12
- Score: 2 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
The essay is very organise but i really don't get the relevance of you mentioning the structure and rhyme scheme to the meaning of the poem. And i kinda think you summerise and translate the poem more than analysing it. I guess it's excellent and helpful for those of us who have no idea what the subject matter of the poem is all about. God knows this is heaven sent for that matter. But as a critical appreciation you could improve it even more if you analyse it further. I did this poem as an unseen text before and i was wondering if you're talking about the persona the poet present himself to be or Thomas himself? But i really like the personal touch you add to it at the end though. Good job on that. ;o)
- 10/10/2004
- 18:45:07
- Score: 17 out of 43 people found this comment useful.
Very imaginative and super creative. Funny too. ;o) When's the next chapter coming??
- 27/09/2004
- 19:17:15
- Score: 2 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
If you are doing the play for your own leisure, i guess its ok. But as a critical appreciation of the play, it seriously lacks depth. What about the reversal of roles? Nature of gentility? Town versus country? Concepts of deception? These are amount other thematic concerns of the play. Other characters such as Tony Lumpkins and Constance also play an important role in the developments of plots.
- 27/09/2004
- 05:24:07
- Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
The gist of it is somewhat there. But could be a much more interesting piece if there is more of the thought process seen. Maybe more elaboration and example?
- 21/09/2004
- 03:28:09
- Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Thank You! This paper is what i was looking for. It totally help me with my finals. Aside from the fact that i spotted the question of sound and silence. Anyways..You Rock!!!
- 20/09/2004
- 05:28:45
- Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
U r reading JD for leisure. seriously though there is too much repetition of the same point.
- 05/09/2004
- 20:38:20
- Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Not much analysis done. It's very narrative. should link it to the gothic element,the use of religious images and the fact that it is a mock epic poem.
- 30/07/2004
- 21:23:59
- Score: 3 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I hit jackpot!!!!!!
- 30/07/2004
- 20:50:18
- Score: 3 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This is really good. There's a level of maturity in thought that is rarely seen nowadays. A plus factor goes to the fact that it has ben well researched. Anyways..i thought u should elaborate the way Charles Dickens feel about women of the Victorian era a bit more.. overall..u rock!! ;o)
- 30/07/2004
- 20:42:50
- Score: 3 out of 8 people found this comment useful.