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  • Response to Summer Trip

    To be honest, this essay seems very blatant and it seems that it was very inexciting. I think that in order to improve the writing, you should try to add a little excitement by changing verbs and using less common words that mean the same thing to give the essya power. Otherwise, a very decent essay on your part.
    • 29/05/2003
    • 16:25:32
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