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Personal Theory behind the Creation of the Universes
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Response to Summer Trip
To be honest, this essay seems very blatant and it seems that it was very inexciting. I think that in order to improve the writing, you should try to add a little excitement by changing verbs and using less common words that mean the same thing to give the essya power. Otherwise, a very decent essay on your part.- 29/05/2003
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