This essay can benefit a lot of people.If only they would read it now!
- 13/07/2003
- 17:47:59
- Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
I love the prohibition does not work argument you cite.I also like the narrative kind of intro. It shows that you really care about the topic, which in turn strengthens your writing's persuasiveness.I also really apreciate the fact that you hav 14 different sources! That's great!
- 13/07/2003
- 17:45:29
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I would definitely vote positively for the essay if you did! Thanks!
- 13/07/2003
- 17:38:40
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think that the essay is decent, but I wish the author included the sources so that I could do some further research if need be.
- 10/07/2003
- 11:23:58
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.