wow, this was great essay, it had a good intro and clear thesis. it was well argued with interesting points and good references. if i need help with any writing i will be sure to try you first!
- 28/07/2003
- 13:37:58
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
well argued, clear points good ref's, the intro or thesis could use some work though kind of awkward wording
- 28/07/2003
- 13:33:30
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
very clear and to the point.
- 28/07/2003
- 13:30:37
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this was a great rendition and anaylsis of the play, good detail and ref. very organized.
- 28/07/2003
- 13:29:17
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
very informative and descriptive, i could almost picture it the description was so vivid. I all set to run out and buy this now, sounds like fun!
- 24/07/2003
- 02:00:17
- Score: 19 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
I think this is a good content essay, it speaks to readers who don't know much about him. however as good as it is i think that the writing style is not as strong as the content.
- 24/07/2003
- 01:44:50
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
the content was good, i sympathize and understand, it is important to bring these issues to light amongst our institutional careers, however it did not come up to par in grammer and writing, not that mine does but this had many typos and awkward worded sentences.
- 23/07/2003
- 20:32:17
- Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
this is essay was written based on course texts and adhered to rigid technical requests of the instructor, it was marked for comprehension of the content and how precise we followed his standards. it has many grammatical error, i don't profuse to be spectacular in english. the original text has the formalities of the assignment more obvious. all in all it speaks to a reader who already has some knowledge in this subject ( modern european history)ps by the way this essay and the other similar to it (biological and moral european justification etc...) do not originally have a title, just a subject we were asked to write on.
- 23/07/2003
- 20:27:17
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
this is essay was written based on course texts and adhered to rigid technical requests of the instructor, it was marked for comprehension of the content and how precise we followed his standards. it has many grammatical error, i don't profuse to be spectacular in english. the original text has the formalities of the assignment more obvious. all in all it speaks to a reader who already has some knowledge in this subject ( modern european history)
- 23/07/2003
- 20:24:32
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.