This is an interesting interpretation of I guess a combination of prejudice and also standing up for yourself. It reminded me a little of the cartoon Ants. I think a little more detail would have helped in expressing the authors thoughts and perhaps creating more sympathy for the pink fish.
- 12/12/2002
- 14:03:42
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay provides a good summary of the history of rock n roll. I like how it is outlined in chronological order.
- 16/10/2002
- 08:20:50
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I must say the content of this essay though probably true is a little frightening. The idea that implants at birth will help us to learn is amazing and is a time that I am glad I will not likely live to see. I did hear recently about plans to start supplying students with laptops and CD-ROMS in place of books in the not so distant future so perhaps some of this progression will occur sooner than we imagine.
- 16/10/2002
- 07:39:07
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a brief but very good paper on teen pressures and stress. It brings out a few issues that people may not typically think of like the pressure from adults that teens are constantly under.
- 15/10/2002
- 16:01:38
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I liked this review it was intellectually written and brought interest to the story line. It was also very descriptive.
- 15/10/2002
- 15:39:56
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This essay is lacking a good deal of content and leaves me in need of additional information. It would be good if the author could add some additional details and a complete summary at the conclusion of the review.
- 15/10/2002
- 14:53:31
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay to an extent but a stronger argument could be made by discussing more about each side of the argument and also by pointing out more statistics.
- 15/10/2002
- 14:50:01
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
I think the author of this article should have perhpas entitled the essay with something about vanity rather than age since the essay addresses what people of all ages do to enhance appearance.In addition I believe perhaps this could have been a little better thought out such as exploring other reasons people may choose to do things that may be perceived as trying to look or feel younger. Perhaps an older man has never been able to afford his dream sports car and once he has put his children through college he is now able to obtain his car and live his dream.Also, stating that older adults are trying to fit in with the "cool" crowd indicates only younger people are considered cool or fun. This sounds very closed minded and again not well thought out.I just think that exploring such options would add more detail and depth to this subject and would help to support the authors opinions.
- 02/04/2002
- 17:08:29
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.