Very stong introduction and conclusion. This essay is well structured and a job well done. Just one tiny bit of constructive criticism: rhetorical questions. While they can be very good at getting one's point across, you don't want to really overdo it with too many at one time. But really, GREAT JOB!
- 25/10/2003
- 13:47:02
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
not much i can say. WOW. Really, GOOD JOByou obviously worked very hard on this, and WOW
- 15/10/2003
- 15:56:40
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I really like your organization in this. Very well drawn out, and you definitely deserved that grade that you recieved. Thumbs up
- 15/10/2003
- 15:51:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
good references, but i feel that more organization could have been taken into account. it was really allright, just organize a little better-- like as in an introduction and body paragraphs-- etc.
- 15/10/2003
- 15:49:25
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
very in depth. thumbs up to you. you obviously did your research.
- 15/10/2003
- 15:46:59
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I really enjoyed this essay. I always feel that the best essays are those that are brief, but to the point. Really, well done.
- 15/10/2003
- 15:28:37
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very nicely cited.. it clearly shows that you did your work. Personally, I give you two thumbs up for a job well done (plus i really enjoyed reading about your topic)Just a bit more organization.. I'm personally not big on 1-2 sentence paragraphs.. but if thats your style.. then cool!
- 03/09/2003
- 17:15:17
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Well, you sure know what you are talking about. When I took biology I didn't know anything, so snaps to you.
- 02/09/2003
- 05:02:41
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Currently I am writing a comparative essay regarding the Native Americans' views on the "whites". Even though my essay topic is completely different than yours, I just wanted to complement you on a job well done.
- 02/09/2003
- 04:58:14
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
nice work, well done.. im not sure if it was meant to be an opinionated essay, but other than that, great job
- 02/09/2003
- 04:53:03
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.