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  • Yay

    Very stong introduction and conclusion. This essay is well structured and a job well done. Just one tiny bit of constructive criticism: rhetorical questions. While they can be very good at getting one's point across, you don't want to really overdo it with too many at one time. But really, GREAT JOB!
    • 25/10/2003
    • 13:47:02
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    not much i can say. WOW. Really, GOOD JOByou obviously worked very hard on this, and WOW
    • 15/10/2003
    • 15:56:40
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • I like

    I really like your organization in this. Very well drawn out, and you definitely deserved that grade that you recieved. Thumbs up
    • 15/10/2003
    • 15:51:30
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Wellll

    good references, but i feel that more organization could have been taken into account. it was really allright, just organize a little better-- like as in an introduction and body paragraphs-- etc.
    • 15/10/2003
    • 15:49:25
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Woah

    very in depth. thumbs up to you. you obviously did your research.
    • 15/10/2003
    • 15:46:59
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Brief but concise

    I really enjoyed this essay. I always feel that the best essays are those that are brief, but to the point. Really, well done.
    • 15/10/2003
    • 15:28:37
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Ooo

    Very nicely cited.. it clearly shows that you did your work. Personally, I give you two thumbs up for a job well done (plus i really enjoyed reading about your topic)Just a bit more organization.. I'm personally not big on 1-2 sentence paragraphs.. but if thats your style.. then cool!
    • 03/09/2003
    • 17:15:17
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Bio

    Well, you sure know what you are talking about. When I took biology I didn't know anything, so snaps to you.
    • 02/09/2003
    • 05:02:41
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Very Nice!!

    Currently I am writing a comparative essay regarding the Native Americans' views on the "whites". Even though my essay topic is completely different than yours, I just wanted to complement you on a job well done.
    • 02/09/2003
    • 04:58:14
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good

    nice work, well done.. im not sure if it was meant to be an opinionated essay, but other than that, great job
    • 02/09/2003
    • 04:53:03
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.