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  • Winning isn't everything.

    The essay was informative but a little on the dry side. I would elaborate with a few more examples of winning that is not everything. Maybe do a example of the hundreds of athletics that strave themselves to go faster or etc. Just needs alittle more in details. Great essay otherwise.
    • 02/04/2002
    • 13:45:36
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.