You have a few grammar mistakes and a few word usage mistakes.This is a touchy subject but you have expressed your opinion well.
- 12/11/2003
- 16:04:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay was very well written however there are a few mistakes that could be fixed with proofreading. You have question marks in odd places.
- 09/11/2003
- 16:32:59
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like this essay. Especially the details. It was like I was there.Very well written.
- 09/09/2003
- 13:03:59
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.