i like your sytle, and i really didnt think of some of your references that way. you make a good point
- 04/05/2005
- 16:37:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i think it is important we include references on this site that arent just in essay style, such as lecture notes, outlines, and writig tools to guide each other in better understanding of the material. Just if that's what you are going to do, say so!
- 30/01/2005
- 22:15:00
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ma'am, i'm praying as i read this that God blesses your family and you may find peace in your heart over the circumstances you portray here. On a literary note, the piece would be novel wothy if many of the incidents weren't rushed through and a more solid conclusion was written. Nonetheless, the readers eyes never leave your page. it's captivating
- 30/01/2005
- 22:11:41
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sry about the tabs, i will attach the word document ofr clarification
- 30/01/2005
- 22:06:00
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i'm glad spirituality is important to you but i dont really understand how this essay will benefit anyone else on this site. it's almost like me posting my christmas list in paragraph form, telling everyone how cute a pair of close-toed brown tweed heels are. i just dont think "how i feel and why" essays should be on here unless they have references!
- 27/11/2004
- 14:55:42
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
im an ads major and you did pretty good except it's not effestive advertising if someone has to struggle with its meaning!
- 27/11/2004
- 14:52:08
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i appreciate your ability to take a topic like religion, and instead of simply saying you dont believe in or can not relate to a god like experience, you moved your attention toward the REASONS people are religious, that no matter what outlet it is, many people are looking for a way to excape themselves and if only for a short time, be humbled by the idea that the world does not revolve around them! excellent job
- 29/03/2004
- 16:08:18
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
you have style, but i find it swings in direction? are you for or against it? or neutral? you didnt really state a thesis or make a conclusion. the two keys to an a paper
- 17/02/2004
- 02:20:01
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
im an american, in southern louisiana, about as far away as you can get in the us from Canada, and even though i had absolutely no idea what se2 was, i learned through your scarcasm and writing style. it was really informative, and you strongly got your point across, more importantly than your stand on that issue, you got across your stand on humanity, that we should all get along and look out for each other no matter what! it was awesome
- 17/02/2004
- 01:59:50
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first of all i honestly believe you bullshitted your way through this essay and put it on here just so you can copy some good stuff. the whole thing has an uneducated feel like your talking down to me, and it could have been rewritten effectively into 5 sentences, if that
- 17/02/2004
- 01:52:35
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
pretty descriptive for an midle school essay. next time put similar thoughts in same paragraph your gonna be a good writer one day
- 17/02/2004
- 01:46:31
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i like this essay , its infromative and helpful but orginization speciffacly transitional sentences are off. also, you could have writtem more about his school, that would have made it more complete, since the Academy was one of his biggest achievements.
- 09/12/2003
- 15:51:33
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
recall that Achilles lies to Patroclus about the conversation with his mother that forshadows he will ide if he enters the battle
- 14/09/2003
- 19:53:50
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.