its prepared n well cited... :D
- 30/01/2005
- 07:04:32
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I don't really know whether or not to believe in God. Sometimes I think He/She is there but sometimes I don't think so. Whether you think God exist or not, it was not able to be proved scientifically..all or they are just ideas n people build it up like a building
- 05/03/2004
- 08:06:59
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
i wish this one would improve my essays for the following years..
- 25/02/2004
- 10:47:46
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You could have explained more about the periodic table like different scientist who altered the periodic table until what it is now...
- 20/02/2004
- 08:59:40
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I enjoy reading your essay, but have a few careless mistakes like your 7th body paragraph..the last sentence...kinda of read over it again and try to join any paregraphs if possible..
- 20/02/2004
- 08:55:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a well researched essay and very imformative...Keep up the good work.
- 18/02/2004
- 09:23:26
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I like the way you think. There popular kids in my grade...Alot of them are smart but the fact the made them different from the nerds are that they party and they're not lame...but the nerds...they are smart but they dont go out often...mostly spend their times at home studying...n they dont take much time into the trend or fashion unlike the popular kids..
- 14/02/2004
- 09:07:51
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like the way you think about stereotyping...i guess everyone out there is a bit stereotyped..n i dont deny the fact that i am one of them...
- 13/02/2004
- 09:04:56
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this is very imformative essay...it should be post in the bulletin of every school so teenage would know the importance of it...
- 11/02/2004
- 07:51:24
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this was a nice essay...n congratulation...u solved your problem..
- 11/02/2004
- 07:44:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this would probably decrease the customers of fastfood restaurants..:p...i think im healthy...drug-free, alcohol-free, tobacco-free...and i exercise every day..just a little underweight...:D
- 07/02/2004
- 09:23:38
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this essay was nice and also...IM DRUG-FREE!!! =)
- 07/02/2004
- 09:14:55
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Your essay is quite long but informative...keep up the good work..
- 07/02/2004
- 08:50:59
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this piece of work was great and infomative...but the only problem here is that...you have at the title WWI and your essay is about WWII..=)
- 05/02/2004
- 11:55:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i like the way it is and it would probably help me at this age of the time...=)
- 05/02/2004
- 11:44:34
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this was a nice essay and gave me an idea of how the KKKs were.
- 04/02/2004
- 09:29:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
the essay was quite nice and supportive but then..it seems like this is not your work. Copy n pasting one of your paragraph into google..i found the website it was from...
- 04/02/2004
- 09:18:39
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this was very imformative to people who doesn't know how to use google. i knew about putting the quotation into the things we're trying to search for about a year...from my teacher last year..
- 03/02/2004
- 08:42:06
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
i never knew that New Zealand was such a horrible place...why dont u send this piece of essay to the government and maybe they'll start moving their ass...or you can be the one to improve it..
- 03/02/2004
- 08:25:29
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
k..your essay was nice but more could have been added to the summary of the story..u didnt mention the dogs going into the contest n Little Ann winning the contest..forgot what it was..n he had to walk to town to bring the dogs back...n about the red fern...i remember something like only the place that an angel visited would have red ferns..
- 03/02/2004
- 08:06:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i guess this essay was fine...but you could have said more about it...
- 03/02/2004
- 07:46:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
the information...was nice...but ur title "Fall of Rome" it sounds like this essay is talking about how Rome fell...a title like "Rome after the fall of Rome" would be nice...
- 18/12/2003
- 10:41:47
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this isn't about the effect the Treaty of Versaille have on Germany. This is just about the Treaty of Versaille. The effects of this treaty is Germany going bankrupt and German marks became worthless and unemployment increased and it is also one of the reason Hitler was able to rise to power
- 04/12/2003
- 10:32:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
many children that prefer stayin in front of the screen is because they dont have good friends to spend their time with or anything better to do...i myself...exercise daily at school...n plays some games at home...
- 30/11/2003
- 10:55:11
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
im a taiwanese myself...n what you've said was right...using a chopstick isn't hard for me...but sometimes I eat with spoon and fork since I live in Thailand
- 28/11/2003
- 09:42:16
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
The estimation of Jews killed is 6 million...n...there are a few more things to say about Hitler...the "Final Solution" was for the "Jewish Problem"
- 28/11/2003
- 09:36:13
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
i enjoyed reading your "essay"...it kinda humoured me while reading it...never knew New Zealand was that bad...i got a friend from New Zealand..but never heard him talk bout it...
- 27/11/2003
- 11:08:28
- Score: 20 out of 27 people found this comment useful.
The rise of Adolf Hitler wasn't very imformative and previously I've been assigned to do a research on him and I know there are more to include and for the WWII section...you could have included the dates of each battles and the WWII started at 1939 and the event that you included with the year was all the way at 1942...you didn't include the Battle of Britain and the battles in Africa...there are alot more.
- 26/11/2003
- 10:06:06
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
very imformative
- 25/11/2003
- 10:43:18
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
The French army was proven to be weak throughout the history. WWI and WWII...the only good thing i remembered about the French army was when Napoleon controlled it...
- 25/11/2003
- 10:04:11
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Ok...I agree with most of the ideas of yours...but think it this way. What if a woman herself was raped? She didn't choose to be raped or the victim of the person who raped her. Would that woman be allowed for an abortion?
- 12/10/2003
- 05:26:06
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
You left me without any questions to ask about marijuana. Nice piece of work and very imformative.
- 11/10/2003
- 23:29:52
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
The body part was very imformative and could be just what many people would ask for The only thing i didn't like about this essay is the introduction. It feels kinda strange when I read it, but the rest are fine.
- 11/10/2003
- 09:12:02
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
everyone check out http://www.praguewriter.com/opini/iraq/iraq.htm.This essay is another plagerized work. stevensegal007...quit being gay by submitting other people's work and saying that its yours. ALL THREE OF YOUR ESSAYS ARENT DONE BY YOU!!!Even my dog knows what belongs to him and what doesn't!
- 07/10/2003
- 06:59:56
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You are really a gay loser. Its just because i caught u plagerizing and you didnt get your point so now your trying to say that i plagerized...i just have to copy and paste one of your paragraphs in your essay and search and I'll know where you got it from. I guess all your essays were from the net. If you can find at least one paragraph online thats exactly the same as mine, I'll admit that I plagerized but I didn't. I spent 5 hours on this essay. This was my school work and I did it for school at submitted it here too.
- 07/10/2003
- 06:56:30
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
check out http://www.pakembassy.az:8101/kashmir.htmlthis person was caught by me...plagerizing the second time...cant we do something about it?
- 07/10/2003
- 06:52:57
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I apologize if there are many grammar mistakes on my essay, but english is not my first language so please understand
- 07/10/2003
- 06:47:29
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.