Essay is comprehensive and a great source for students majoring in Finance. Only change I would make would be too put the definitions near the end right before the references, because they interrupt the flow of the essay.
- 15/11/2005
- 19:04:25
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a great essay, but I am not sure this is 11th grade work. It is more like a 9th-10th grade essay. But overall the information is great, and good analysis on Hemmingway's style.
- 18/11/2004
- 14:19:15
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Sorry I forgot to mention it, but it was an Extra Credit assignment, where you would have to read like a 15 pg magazine article and write a summary about it, thats why its kinda short. I was the only one who did it, lolz.
- 06/11/2004
- 08:44:44
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I believe the only way and just way to get peace in the Mid-East is too eliminate the country of Israel. The muslims are the rightful owners, and the Jews came and took the muslim's lands, with the support of greedy countries such as the United Kingdom and United States.
- 10/01/2004
- 21:03:31
- Score: 13 out of 37 people found this comment useful.
This is a very weak and short essay. In your body paragraphs you give no direct evidence from the book. There were so many lines you could have quoted from Brutus' or Antony's speech. Could have improved easily if you just spent more time.
- 10/01/2004
- 11:57:01
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.