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  • This is not your work!!!!

    YOU COPIED THIS FROM THE ClassicNotes WEBSITE!http://www.classicnote.com/ClassicNotes/Titles/heartofdarkness/
    • 05/11/2003
    • 20:15:58
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • SPELLING!

    it is spelt PAWN nor PORN when refering to a game of chess or someone who is being manipulated/used.
    • 05/11/2003
    • 20:02:54
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Use of the colour red

    very good use of your text and well written! my only criticism was i felt you were grasping for examples in the colour 'red' section: roses can be white, yellow, pink, orange and Othello does not specify the colour. doesn't he mention Desdemona's red lips somewhere in the text? that would be more appropraiate as it has connotations with lust and temptation etc. well done.
    • 05/11/2003
    • 19:49:03
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Othello essay

    good essay - very in depth
    • 05/11/2003
    • 19:16:21
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • My comment

    how could you get 98% for this essay? no offense as yes it is written well but it is incredibly short and has NO quotes or references to the text. It has potential but needs more work to make it work.
    • 05/11/2003
    • 18:56:39
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • My comment

    needs more evidence to back up your thesis: you need to use more quotes!
    • 05/11/2003
    • 18:39:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.