Not only good job telling your story but I'm proud you gave up drugs and violence! Keep it up. Like all of your other writings, I really enjoy reading everything you write.
- 23/03/2006
- 13:04:55
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Think you did a great job of putting these events in your life on paper. Really engaged the reader and little to no errors. No suggestions here!
- 23/03/2006
- 13:02:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think what you wrote is good but I feel there needs to be better organization to make this an "A" paper.
- 23/03/2006
- 12:59:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I thought you presented the subject very well and brought in your own support to the paper. I liked reading how you feel on this subject. Not a lot of errors! Very well written.
- 23/03/2006
- 12:57:16
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Some minor grammatical and spelling mistakes but the story was very well thought out.
- 01/02/2006
- 20:05:37
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like your beginning and I definitly feel it attracts the reader. Some run on sentences but overall a good essay.
- 01/02/2006
- 20:02:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading this essay. I thought you had a strong opening and I feel you explained the topic very well. Nice read.
- 17/01/2006
- 21:50:28
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You did a good job giving an overall view of the "internet" but I think a lot of the things you said you need to talk more about. A lot of people reading an essay like this would be unfamilar with TCP/IP protocols or... explain what they are!
- 17/01/2006
- 21:48:53
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I didn't get too much out of reading this essay. I feel it is well written and clearly organized, but not really sure if this is the "Market Strategy" of McDonalds.
- 17/01/2006
- 21:46:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading this. I didn't find it too long and I didn't see you leave out anything important. You really told the story of Albert Einstein very well.
- 23/12/2005
- 18:06:49
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Would've liked to see you take one side. Hero or villain?
- 23/12/2005
- 18:04:54
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I liked this. I thought you did a great job supporting why Abigail Williams is the most powerful character. Good opening and even better closing.
- 23/12/2005
- 18:02:24
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Some sentences can be reworded to strengthen your points but overall I think you did a pretty good job.
- 23/12/2005
- 18:00:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Not really an essay but it has some solid facts. I think this could be helpful for anyone looking into conditioning. Good information.
- 07/12/2005
- 19:06:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Interesting take on an interesting topic. You did use some pretty good examples but it can be stronger. Make sure to take a side.
- 07/12/2005
- 19:04:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good job. You made it clear what point you were trying to get across. I thought maybe you could develop your essay a little more, but this was good enough. Stronger examples maybe?
- 28/11/2005
- 13:10:31
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I think you provide strong examples. Overall the paper is great. I do think some parts are repetitive.
- 06/11/2005
- 18:27:19
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
That's a lot of great information. You go into details and give specific examples from the play.
- 06/11/2005
- 17:09:47
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good but can be better. I think a stronger opening paragraph would greatly help your essay. You have a lot of good information but you can make your arguments stronger.
- 05/06/2005
- 15:14:25
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You explained your view well, but could have made it stronger.
- 24/04/2005
- 11:17:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Looks good,like how you make the reader imagine "what if you..."
- 24/04/2005
- 11:15:47
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading it. Felt you supported your opening paragraph well and very few writing errors.
- 24/04/2005
- 11:13:12
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Really strong thesis and top sentence. It's an easy read and definitly factual.
- 22/04/2005
- 16:17:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Nothing really to improve. Did a gret job going into detail and explaining more than just the theatre.
- 22/04/2005
- 16:12:35
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Definitly a very important part of literature history. Did a good job comparing the two authors and forerunners for civil rights.
- 03/04/2005
- 15:01:06
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Defintly needs more improvement, but like everyone else said, it's definitly more a bio then you taking your own side. get some more of your feelings in it. also may need to change it a little now with the steroids ;) j/k, just strengthen your views
- 28/03/2005
- 19:15:45
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Lot of great info but really don't go into a lot of detail. Can be strengthended with quotes and more text. Great paper now but can be better.
- 20/03/2005
- 13:32:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Maybe think about building more than one paragraph.
- 15/02/2005
- 17:38:54
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It almost seems like you just copied this from encarta or worldbook. This essay isn't on the causes of the great depression, but a lot more.
- 09/01/2005
- 08:10:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Really fact filled paper with a lot of evidence to back up everything you say. Very well worded and interesting.
- 02/01/2005
- 08:04:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I can see why you received a perfect paper. This is an amazing essay which talks a lot about the novel and the moral development of Huck. It also gave me another way to look at the book differently, comparing it to my own life. I did not see any mistakes. PERFECT PAPER.
- 14/06/2004
- 14:58:09
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i think this could become a great paper, but right now there are some grammatical errors. long sentences really hurt the essay. it has great facts and discusse the topic very well, but like i said, can be better.
- 13/06/2004
- 20:29:31
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
great information, way to get right to the point. not really anything on history of TB, but this is exectly what I needed!
- 07/06/2004
- 11:56:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A very entertaining satire. I especially liked the part discussing their hair style and how the grease can help keep it in place!
- 06/06/2004
- 11:26:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Awesome essay, jam packed with A LOT of information. Perfect for any report and goes into detail about EVERYTHING. Maybe a little too much about rezulin but GREAT.
- 19/05/2004
- 18:55:03
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Looks a lot like the essay below you on diabetes titled "Nearly 16 million people in the United States--nearly one out of every 17 people--have diabetes. And about 1,800 new cases are diagnosed each day." Give credit where it is due!
- 19/05/2004
- 18:15:50
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great study guide for Angina and other related diseases. Thanks for all the info
- 19/05/2004
- 13:54:37
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Little room for improvement, but overall great job. Way to stick to the topic and back it up!
- 28/04/2004
- 20:16:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Perfect essay for what I was looking for. Really gave a good view on President Jackson and concentrated on one subject. Great Job!
- 28/04/2004
- 20:13:56
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Not enough detail. It really does not give that much information.
- 15/04/2004
- 13:13:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Interesting input on Bartleby, overall pretty good. Could expand a little more with more examples to back up your thesis. Good job concluding the essay.
- 01/04/2004
- 16:14:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good job addressing the topic and supporting the opening paragraph.
- 01/04/2004
- 15:58:13
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Great job on analyzing this quote.
- 29/03/2004
- 22:03:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I felt it was a pretty good essay but did not go into great detail. Would have been interested if you talke more about your view on drugs, but not sure if that was part of the prompt.
- 29/03/2004
- 21:56:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Felt it was great for anyone thinking of learning about becoming a resturant manager. Very well set up and gave great examples on how to make your way to becoming a great resturant manager (DECA). Overall, great job.
- 25/03/2004
- 22:05:41
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very fact filled short essay on frisbees. Never knew anything that you said before reading! A lot of great information and put together very well.
- 25/03/2004
- 21:58:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.