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  • Of mice and men

    you miss some thing in your essay, like crooks dream(he doen't have one), candy's dream. If you add these it will be perfect. You have a weak introduction and conclution, so you have to improve on that
    • 11/10/2003
    • 20:35:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    Good essay. The infomation is clearly and well presentedthis help me alot on my project
    • 01/10/2003
    • 01:40:19
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    this is a good essayit helped me alotit had detailed infomation
    • 27/09/2003
    • 02:03:01
    • Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    good writing, few grammer mistakes
    • 25/09/2003
    • 03:27:59
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.