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  • What is the Nature of Political Participation Under Authoritarian Forms of State Rule and Are the People Necessarily Oppressed?

    Great Essay, its very informative and helpful, except that authoritarian and totalitarian are different in several aspects. Also the last paragraph that begins with "in conclusion" is awkward because you already wrote a conclusion in the previous paragraph. Lastly, that sentence also brought up religion, which has no purpose in the topic that you are writing about. Without the last sentence (which strongly voices your opinion) the paper would be a solid C.
    • 06/10/2003
    • 14:28:57
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.