it was very well put together, i would have kept it all in one tense, (1st person, 2nd person or thrid person) I forget the "correct" term for it sorry.. but you had lots of information and connected it all very well :)
- 28/10/2003
- 19:04:23
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very good! flows wonderfully, the paragraphs connect together very nicely and short and to the point!
- 16/10/2003
- 13:48:13
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well written yet could be a little longer you have a lot of informaiton so maybe somemore citations.? but other than that good job!!
- 16/10/2003
- 13:44:04
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well done, very detailed and informative! said everythign that was asked and more!
- 01/10/2003
- 18:57:37
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well written(loved the outline at top!!) Very detailed and informative great job!
- 28/09/2003
- 14:29:47
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