its a good comprehensive bio of his life well done
- 11/07/2005
- 04:01:53
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you started off well but then you got sidetracked on your own stories, you could use these as examples but you could alsohave some more evidence to back up your points
- 27/11/2003
- 01:58:20
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
good wording and analysis, well done
- 21/11/2003
- 19:21:41
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
u'r 'essay' is only really 3 paragraphs and in the third you sort of bunch up all u'r ideas or topic sentences i thought the opening para was good but your structure went down form there.
- 21/11/2003
- 19:17:04
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dont worry, i wont diss it, i thought it was good although it didn't flow the whole way through but it was a good topic, v. controversial topic
- 21/11/2003
- 19:10:04
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i thought it was a bit unordered and there were a few spelling and grammer mistakes, it could have been better
- 20/11/2003
- 02:41:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
you dont know unless you try.your definitly one the right track with your essay, i loved it
- 20/11/2003
- 02:29:43
- Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
while i do believe that advertising of junk food can be harmful, 'if you drink pepsi and eat maccas you'll be cool' i believe people need some self control, they can't always blame other people for heir probs. they need to face the truth someday.
- 20/11/2003
- 02:25:05
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
baz luhrmanns film does break the language barrier, but did the characters in the film have to yell every line?? shakespeare actually follows a rhythym, which baz certainly didn't, good writing though..
- 20/11/2003
- 02:20:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
you have backed up your arguments v. well, it is a very contraversial issue and you write the essay very well. well done
- 20/11/2003
- 02:07:09
- Score: 22 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
i never knew NZ was such a bad place! nice stuff though!
- 18/11/2003
- 01:57:18
- Score: 12 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
what exactly was u'r arguments?could be a lot lot better
- 13/11/2003
- 23:45:40
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Darwins theory was also used by Hitler & Australian Pioneers to kill off Jews and Aboriginals, but other than that it was v. interesting to say the least
- 13/11/2003
- 23:35:58
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i haven't actually read Mein Kampf but after i read u'r notes i still understood what you were talking about.Nice stuff!!!
- 13/11/2003
- 19:48:04
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nice essay. short but explores his life.
- 13/11/2003
- 19:25:02
- Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this is a really interesting essay ellyjean, it clearly shows how much Aus. follows the USA. nice stuff!
- 12/11/2003
- 02:54:20
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it was a pretty good book report, though i would have to say i didn't really enjoy the book or the series, too repeditive.the report was great though.
- 12/11/2003
- 01:56:16
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nice work tesibaby15 a good essay and points.
- 12/11/2003
- 01:52:14
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That is such an amazing essay, it must have taken you ages to write and it was worth it. all i can say is WOW.
- 06/11/2003
- 20:09:29
- Score: 22 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
I've never heard of Kleins book, but now im desperate to read it, you put up some really good points and overall its a good essay
- 03/11/2003
- 23:50:48
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I feel exactly the same, People say they don't care about beauty or weight, but then they use anti age creams and make up and are always watching what they eat, People should be happy with who they are.Good Quotes and Arguments
- 03/11/2003
- 23:39:56
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I'm not very religous, and i just read your essay on a whim and it was great! You obviously know what your talking aboutGreat Stuff
- 03/11/2003
- 23:30:58
- Score: 18 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
i enjoyed your essay, although i didn't totally agree with your point of view, it was well written.
- 29/10/2003
- 21:55:56
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You did a great job with the comparisons, i loved it, great use of vocab. well done
- 20/10/2003
- 23:26:10
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.