Great job. I am currently studying Adolf Hitler and his rize to power in Germany. I think I will be using this when I write my paper for the class.
- 19/10/2003
- 10:15:40
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Good paper for students in law school. Pretty informative. Great job!
- 18/10/2003
- 18:55:51
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Excellent. You should consider being a game tester.
- 18/10/2003
- 18:52:36
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is great. I see absolutely nothing wront with this paper. Good job!
- 18/10/2003
- 18:47:38
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very good, very informational. Great structure. Perect.
- 18/10/2003
- 18:38:13
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I think you should try to word some things differently. Some of the sentences don't really make sense. You should also consider putting this in a category other than creative writing.
- 18/10/2003
- 18:18:21
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Pretty good essay, although you may want to add more. Try this link for more info http://encarta.msn.com/encnet/refpages/RefArticle.aspx?refid=761569981
- 18/10/2003
- 18:15:48
- Score: 5 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Excellent paper. Great word choice and content. Very thorough. This is the best essay I've seen so far!
- 18/10/2003
- 18:01:50
- Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Overall, the essay was pretty good. The sentences in the first paragraph are rather abrubt, so you may want to consider editing them. Since it's a biography, you may want to talk more about his life and a little less about his work. You can find some information at the following sites:http://encarta.msn.com/encnet/refpages/RefArticle.aspx?refid=761562147http://www-gap.dcs.st-and.ac.uk/~history/Mathematicians/Einstein.htmlhttp://www.nobel.se/physics/laureates/1921/einstein-bio.html
- 18/10/2003
- 17:28:26
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.