Real good essay and I loved the story at the end. I did find 2 spelling/writing errors though, 1--you said "You all of a sudden turn your attention to the girl sleeping in your___,..."you didn't finish the thought 2--you wrote "You throw on some clothes and try to look as profession__.."You misspelled professional. Overall though..I really liked it. The intro was funny too. "stupid intro aside"
- 29/11/2003
- 12:43:02
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
yup...it does flow smoothy. I like it.good job
- 29/11/2003
- 12:07:06
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a really good essay. The last paragraph was the best...it really stands out.Great Job
- 29/11/2003
- 11:58:55
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I love Nicholas Sparks's books...so I love this. Great Job!
- 23/10/2003
- 18:37:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I had to do this last week, but I wrote about Cosmetology. Mine was REALLY long though, and real discriptive, but this is good too...don't worry :) If you want...you can see mine..just look the word Cosmetology up and you'll find it.Good job!
- 23/10/2003
- 18:25:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
These are some really good reason's why you shouldn't watch TV, I could use this paper for a persuasive essay in English. Great Job!
- 23/10/2003
- 18:19:21
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your descriptions of the book are excellent, I'm really hoping I can find it at the library so I can read it.
- 19/10/2003
- 08:55:59
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
That's alot of info, I'll probably we needing it later on this year.
- 19/10/2003
- 07:55:58
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.