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    I like your interpretation and analysis but proof read a little more.
    • 21/10/2003
    • 12:54:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • In agreement

    I agree that the drinking age should not be lowered. Being in a senior in high school I hear alot of people say "If I can be drafted I should be able to drink." This is absurd because the chances are that you won't be called into duty. But in a way they do present a point. I believe that those who are fighting for our country should be able to drink. I would be pretty unhappy if it was the day before I go to war and it maybe the last chance I have to drink and I wasn't able to because of the law. I think it only fair that those people fighting to protect our rights and privileges should have those rights and privileges. Why should they fight for something they don't have? In closing I would like to say that no one under 21 should drink unless enlisted in the military and on active duty. That may even boost our number of volunteers. Though kids may make fake military I.D.'s or something that you be impersonating an officer and that's a big no-no.
    • 21/10/2003
    • 12:40:35
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • Several things...

    First off, let's try to give constructive criticism here. I may not have been here as long as you, but that doesn't give you the right to take pot shots at my work. Write your own if you don't like it. Secondly, my entire point about the family thing is that justice would be served but it the death penalty shouldn't be out of revenge. Another thing, what is this mess about abortion? Yes I'm against it but I never used it as an example in my essay. Legalized murder is in here which is used to show that murder should not be legalized. No man or woman should have the right(especially one protected by the government) to take a life. Finally, NEVER EVER DID I SAY THAT EXECUTIONS RAISED CRIME RATES. I merely stated that the death penalty isn't lowering crime rates. And if a homeless man wants to commit murder so he can get his asshole raped every time he drops a bar of soap then by God let him. Any man that is willing to be someone's bitch for a place to sleep go ahead. And I think that we should not let them back out. I think that life impisonment with out parole would be a worse punishment and then he would not get out to commit the murder again. And finally I would like to say that I am against abortion but for the death penalty. I just wrote this paper because it was required of me for my Research and Writing course and I thought someone might benefit from it.
    • 20/10/2003
    • 19:34:44
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.