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  • What this could improve on

    I am not from the USA so I don't know how high up 13th grade is. This essay is technicly well written and well explained, however it wouldn't pass the standard uni wualification courses here becuase yu haven't backed this up with evidence. Every time you make a point always have a point to back it up with. Observe it, make a quotation and explain it. That is what would make this essay more successful.
    • 20/10/2003
    • 09:53:44
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.