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  • Beautiful essay

    i love your descriptive essay- it really provokes the imagination and makes the reader feel like they're with you, experiencing the same feelings, emotions, and seeing the scenery that you are describing. there were a few spelling and grammatical errors, but overall, i really liked it
    • 14/01/2004
    • 01:46:00
    • Score: 41 out of 42 people found this comment useful.
  • Multiculturalism

    its a good essay, i'd have to say, but most of it is based on opinion. It could be improved with more factual data and more research. merely stating an opinion does not qualify it as a proper essay. and using "white people" is a somewhat political incorrect term. maybe "caucasian" would be more appropriate...overall, good opinions, and well stated
    • 23/10/2003
    • 19:47:01
    • Score: 21 out of 21 people found this comment useful.